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A Secret Story P1

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dreamed I was missing
You were so scared
But no one would listen
'Cause no one else cared

After my dreaming
I woke with this fear
What am I leaving
When I'm done here?

So if you're asking me
I want you to know

When my time comes
Forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some
Reasons to be missed
And don't resent me
And when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory
Leave out all the rest
Leave out all the rest

Don't be afraid
I've taken my beating
I've shared what I've made
I'm strong on the surface
Not all the way through
I've never been perfect
But neither have you

So if you're asking me
I want you to know

When my time comes
Forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some
Reasons to be missed
Don't resent me
And when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory
Leave out all the rest
Leave out all the rest

Forgetting all the hurt inside
You've learned to hide so well
Pretending someone else can come
And save me from myself
I can't be who you are

When my time comes
Forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some
Reasons to be missed
Don't resent me
And when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory
Leave out all the rest
Leave out all the rest

Forgetting all the hurt inside
You've learned to hide so well
Pretending someone else can come
And save me from myself
I can't be who you are
I can't be who you are
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( song befor he die )

MY OLD STORY
(THE LAST STORY LINE OF UNBELIEVEBLE LIVE)

A SECRET STORY BETWEEN THE WORLDS

Last Chapter: My Last Breath

Jin

DETAILS:

* PRINCE OF THE DARKNESS - THE NEXT EMPAIRE LEADER
* BROTHER OF LINEAGE
* MOST POERFULL WARRIOR IN THE DARK WORLD
* PLAN TO TAKE DOWN LIN FROM THE BATTLE BUT HE NEVER THOUGHT HE SHALL FALL IN LOVE
* LATER HAVE A RELATIONSHIP WITH LIN

BAD END BUT IN THE END BEGIN A NEW STORY A SECRET WILL APPEAR ;) :P

SHORT STORY LINE....

LIN BECAME A GREAT WARRIOR ANGEL. SO RYGAR ASK HER TO BATTLE WITH THE DARKNESS. BECOURSE LINEAGE ALSO IN THE BATTLE. THATS WILL BE A GREAT BATTLES FOR ALL THIS PAST TIMES. THE FIRST SECOND BATTLE WAS GREAT! BECOURSE THE BATTLES WAS VERY SHORT AND AMAZING. SO LINEAGE HATED TO BATTLING WITH LIN. SO SHE MAKING PLANS HOW SHE CAN GET LIN DOWN.

SO A NEW CHARACTER : JIN ( BROTHER OF LINEAGA )

HER OLDER BROTHER JIN GAVE LINEAGE A IDEA TO SURPRISE HER AND KNOCK OUT HER. LINEAGE SAD NO YOU SURPRISE HER AND KNOCK HER OUT.

SO THE BATTLE BEGINS THAY FIGHT HARD AGAIN, LIKE ALLWAYS LIN BEAT LINEAGA DOWN. LIONHEARD SHIELD HER AND TAKE HER FAR FROM LIN. LIN LEFT HER ALSO, FAST SHE GO HELP OTHERS. IN A MOMENT UNEXPECTED SAMEONE BEHIND HER TO FIGHT WITH HER. SHE TRUN AND SHIELD HER WITH HER SWORD ON HERSELF ( DONT KNOW HOW TO EXPLANE THE SITUATION JUST THINK OK GUYS :D )

THEN SHE SAW SAMETHING SHE NEVER EXPACT IN THIS BATTLE WORLD. SHE PUT HER SWORD DOWN AND WAS SPEACHLESS.

HE LOOK HER AND HAD NO IDEA WHAT SHE WAS DOING!. SHE JUST SPEAKLESS. AFTER SHE AS HERSELF SHE LEFT THE BATTLE GROUND AND GO WAY BACK TO HER PLACE. RYGAR AND OTHER GUARDIANS SAW THAT ( JACK,JANNIFER, RYGAR AND STEVE ) JACK SAD IM GOING AFTER HER.

JACK CAME TO HER ASK HER WHAT THE REASON WHY SHE LEFT THE BATTLE.
SHE TOLD THE PAST LIVE OF HER AND ITS DIFFICULD TO FIGHT HIM.
BECOURSE OF THIS THE BATTLES WAS TIGHT.
LINEAGE AND HER EMPIRE WAS HAPPY AND CELEBRATED BIG. AFTER THE CELEBRATION JIN WENT TO HIS ROOM. LINGEAGA CAME IN TO HIS ROOM AND TALK PROUD ABOUT HIM. JIN SAY IM ALSO HAPPY BUT WHAT WAS THE REASON SHE WITHOUT TO BEAT ME SHE LEFT THE BATTLEGROUND ITS NOTTHING SOMETHING FOR ANGELS AM I RIGHT?
SO THAY START A SURCH ABOUT LIN.
AT LEAST THAY FOUND THE PAST. SHE IS A HUMAN BUT NOW SHE TRAINESD TO A BATTLE ANGEL. ITS NOT TO BELIEF BUT THAY ALSO FOUND A BIG WEAKNESS. WITH THIS WEAKNESS THAY MADE A NEW PLANS.

AFTER 3 BATTLES
JACK CAME BACK TO HER AND TOLD HER LOT OF ADVIES AND HELP HER TO COME BACK TO THE BATTLES.
SO SHE MAKE HER HEART AS A STONE CAME BACK. AND FIGHT ALL THE DARKNESS DOWN BUT STILL SHE CANT BEAT HIM LIKE THE OTHERS. JIN SAW HOW WEAK SHE WAS FOR HIM SO HE USE THIS TO TAKE CONTROLE ON HER. HE PLAYED SAMETHING HE NEVER WILL BE.

TIME PAST WAY. JIN SAW SHE IS NOT REALY ON HIS CONTROLE SO HE MUST DO SAMETHING TO TAKE HER TRUST ON HIM. SO LIN ASKED HIM SAMETHING TO DO THAT DARKNESS NEVER DO. SO HE MAKE A PROMISE HE CAN DO IT. AS HE PROMISE HE DID. BUT ITS WAS NOT EASY TO DO IT. BECOURSE HIS LIVE IS IN THIS GAME. THE PROMISE CANT STAY FOR LONG BECOURSE THERE IS A SECRET BEHIND IT.

( SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH ) :D
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Draculard's avatar
Very sweet and good work